A comic about a Yoshi, and his efforts to become a hero. To evolve, become something more than he was meant to be.

#34 Live and Learn is an awesome song
December 14th, 2006, 11:00 pm

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Author's Comments

TheYoshiHerd | December 14th, 2006, 11:01 pm



I have discovered that I hate doing long action sequences, and instead love short humorous comics. How the heck am I gonna do a dramatic battle at the end, then?


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User's Comments

blingmobile | December 16th, 2006, 11:33 am



A little friendly critique.

Ok?

No flames.

1. Don't use default light blue for the sky, it is very ugly, and can turn people away fast.

2. The "Smack" in the third panel could have been in an action bubble to make it more apparent.

3. Same with the "Biff".

And if you really want to make a nice looking, and humorous comic, check out:

http://makingspritecomic.smackjeeves.com/

Ok?

You have potential.


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